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After some weeks of doing research and diving deep into what the topic is, the first draft of the chapter took shape and was uploaded to the Working Book.
I tried my best to be as informative as possible, reference previous articles that I have read on this topic and to give reader a good sense of understanding on what I am writing about.
The feedback I have received from Adam was helpful and insightful and it gave me pointers to what I could be improving upon further, for example, in the future I could go more into why nostalgia happens in people, in my chapter I kind of gave a brief but not detailed explanation for it and I feel like that could be improved upon.
In conclusion I think that this first attempt at the chapter was good and people understood the general idea that I was going for. The other chapters were also good and insightful and I hope that the feedback I have provided can help be improved further.
ello comrade I see that you were in fact diving deep your article was quite the read I must say the information was well laid out im happy youre going deeper into the nostalgia and process of it and best of luck with it dear fellow all the blessings n dat and fair well :)
ReplyDeleteHello Wallet Magnet, I'm beyond happy to hear you're getting good feedback from your triad, and that you're learning how you can expand further upon your topic. It's shaping up to be a fantastic read from what I remember seeing of it.
ReplyDeleteGood day and lots of love xoxo